This is the future I always hope for them. Aww, fuzzy. Thank you!
sorry if I submit this twice [can you even do that here? I'm not totally sure how this place works yet] but my computer spazzed on me
anyways: very impressed. Second person has a tendancy to get a little awkward if the story or prose goes on for too long, but you handled it very well here. I really enjoyed it. Great job!
Aw. What's weird is that I actually wrote something a lot like this a while ago...with the "imagine" and the second person and the present tense. Except I'm sure you pulled it off much better than I did (after all, mine didn't have adorable-in-love-boys-all-grown-up.
I love the picture you've painted of their future life here. Everything just seems so *right*, as though it really could have been what happened after the movie...the deaths, the marriages, especially the jobs.
Amazing job!
Oooh this was happiness. The second person present tense really worked. It gave it this great sense of imediacy. And your representation of Jack and David was just so very great.
omg! THAT was amazing and so sad and sweet and cute!