I forget how long ago I read this, but it's one of my favourite Javid fics. Sheer brilliance, and I particularly enjoy the length - weird, but I prefer brevity. Good work!
@.@ That was the best ten-minute scene that has ever been written out. Ever. 'Cause it makes a movie run through my head, and that's just awesome. [wants to be able to write like that] Gothic Author
That is probably one of the hottest kisses ever written (in the fandom, at the very least.) I can honestly say I'd never thought of David as the forceful one before, but considering the end of the movie, it totally works and it's a brilliant take on his character. *adores*
"His hands spasmed open, shut, then shot out and scrambled for a hold in the fabric of David's shirt." Fucking hot. You rock my socks off, woman.