Poor Sarah i always knew that kiss would come back and bite her on the ass - I was right. I know she'll eventually move on from this, but in the meantime situations like this really do suck!
Oooh, very good! I do enjoy looking at the Jack/David relationship from Sarah's point of view, and I think this got her just right--the characterization and voice, the feelings/emotions, all of it. Short but very enjoyable. Good job! :)