Reviewer: shinigami_nanoda Signed Date: 08.17.2012 - 08:21PM Title: Introductions

I'm interested in your take on Snitch (I think I'll be a fan of blackmailing!Snitch)! I think you've got a good setup going, but you could slow down the story a little in order to give more detail. For example: I want to know how Race worked up the courage to ask Spot out/why did he let Jack talk him into it.

Keep on going!